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I think it is. Yes you can find ones more outwardly raving but the constraint here I believes serves to intensify, to give the poem a seething and disturbing quality that mere ranting could never more for possess. It is worthy of note how she centres her misandry on sex and universalizes her partner in it, it not a matter of a particular male but "the man's" but at the same time it is not "the woman's mouth" in the porm but "my mouth", something personal and particular as opposed to the standard and unversial mouth that "the male" possesses. Also something that is important here is how distant this is from Christian "sex negativity" in that the sexual is not despised through being held in juxposition to anything else.
Mock Orange by Louise Gluck.
It is not the moon, I tell you.
It is these flowers
lighting the yard.
I hate them.
I hate them as I hate sex,
the man’s mouth
sealing my mouth, the man’s
paralyzing body—
and the cry that always escapes,
the low, humiliating
premise of union—
In my mind tonight
I hear the question and pursuing answer
fused in one sound
that mounts and mounts and then
is split into the old selves,
the tired antagonisms. Do you see?
We were made fools of.
And the scent of mock orange
drifts through the window.
How can I rest?
How can I be content
when there is still
that odor in the world?
Mock Orange by Louise Gluck.
It is not the moon, I tell you.
It is these flowers
lighting the yard.
I hate them.
I hate them as I hate sex,
the man’s mouth
sealing my mouth, the man’s
paralyzing body—
and the cry that always escapes,
the low, humiliating
premise of union—
In my mind tonight
I hear the question and pursuing answer
fused in one sound
that mounts and mounts and then
is split into the old selves,
the tired antagonisms. Do you see?
We were made fools of.
And the scent of mock orange
drifts through the window.
How can I rest?
How can I be content
when there is still
that odor in the world?